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And here's the second and last part of my Girls und Panzer Wedgie fic! This only took what a month and half? Well I suppose compared to the gap between Part 1 and my Yang/Kisara story it isn't that bad. :D (Big Grin) 

Yukari is easily my favorite GuP character so this was a bit of a passion project of mine if the 9K wordcount just for this part didn't give it away

Overall I'm really happy with this one, It was fun writing not just two different kinds of wedgies but also two very different kinds of wedgie givers. For Kay I took her already fun-loving laidback canon personality and figured she'd be the kind of person who could give a wedgie without any malice. Hell her response to getting a wedgie would probably be to congratulate the person who did it after it was over.

Alisa on the other hand is a whole different kettle of fish. She's a clever schemer who clearly enjoys getting the better of her opponents in the show and I thought she'd take the same joy in humiliating other girls. That being said she's also a smug little troll who even the rest of Saunders doesn't seem to like so I also imagined she got her panties destroyed on a regular basis in a wedgie AU. That characterization of desperate desire for glory despite being at the bottom of the totem pole was partially inspired by :iconsleepallof2day: , :iconrzanthr: , and :iconseseta: 's League of Unexceptional Bullies. As for those disapointed that Alisa didn't get any punishment for breaking the rules anybody who watched the show knows she manages to genuinely piss Kay off during their match with Ooarai. Suffice to say at least in this universe that had consequences. Devilish 

Speaking of Alisa it's kind of funny how her crew has a fanbase despite them having barely any lines and or even proper names. I attribute it to their great nonverbal snark. That being said writing two characters without names and having to rely on their fan nicknames instead made writing them a little awkward.

The climax with the entire team was really fun to make because I love the idea of somebody being humiliated in front of a crowd but amusingly enough it was actually a late addition added to the story as I was writing it.

I have a couple more Girls und Panzer story ideas starring some other cast members but none of them could really support a full thing so I'm thinking of maybe doing an anthology story collection. If anybody has any suggestions or ideas for that feel free to give them in the comments. That being said it probably won't be my next immediate project, I've got another idea for that.

Anyway sorry for ranting so much, hope you all enjoyed this because I enjoyed making it.

Also once again big shoutout to :iconwedgie-jaegerv2: for being my prereader. You rock! Also so does his stuff so on the off chance somebody follows me but not him definitely check them out!
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A very fun read! Clap(the whole thing, part 1+2)
Yukari is my definite favorite of the Ooarai bunch, so that makes it even better. :D (Big Grin) 

Though, nothing against your proofreader, but it could have used a few more passes. Still a bunch of small but distracting errors.
Still, very good. Nod